How to Construct a Sentence…

Survey the mind

Before laying a foundation in thought.

Then layer with more observation

To avoid walls that are blind

Or a dull coat.

Let penning down be the roofing

And rewriting – the furnishing.

 

 

© Heath Muchena, 2013


2 Comments on “How to Construct a Sentence…”

  1. I love this poem. It is very insightful. I have learned he hard way that we must rewrite our scripts as we live our lives. To be committed to one train of thought is dangerous. I wrote a blog about this idea.
    https://anniemimihall.wordpress.com/2014/11/27/adult-children-of-alcoholics-tend-to-continue-with-a-decision-or-a-choice-even-when-it-becomes-apparent-that-it-is-not-a-good-one/
    Nice to read your beautiful, very intelligent and philosophical verses
    Namaste,
    Annie

    Like

  2. I of July says:

    thank you… I truly appreciate it

    Like


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