September Spring III
Posted: September 21, 2014 Filed under: Writings by one ambidextrous... 5 Commentssun meets eye and forms can be seen
from the small snail which slithers –
its soft parts out of its shell –
shining
sounds from species of all sorts celebrating spring
some soaked in waters; savouring the surplus stock of the seas
others soaring on the summery winds high up in the clear blue skies
many swinging from branches and scores searching through soil and landscapes for spoils
streets spill with skin and sin –
the sweat of struggle turns sweet –
like Sunday in September
© Heath Muchena, 2014
Very beautiful. Thank you for sharing
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Lovely sounds with your words – I think I mean alliteration! 🙂
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Beautiful u made my soul sing .
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wonderful, it made me think about perspective. I would love if you could check out my writing and giving me some feedback if you could spare the time http://www.elusivethoughtsinmind.wordpress.com/
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I am so glad I found your blog! I love using alliteration in my work sometimes too. this is a very enjoyable piece! Thank you, and I will be reading more of your work!
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