September Spring III

sun meets eye and forms can be seen

from the small snail which slithers –

its soft parts out of its shell –



sounds from species of all sorts celebrating spring

some soaked in waters; savouring the surplus stock of the seas

others soaring on the summery winds high up in the clear blue skies

many swinging from branches and scores searching through soil and landscapes for spoils


streets spill with skin and sin –

the sweat of struggle turns sweet –

like Sunday in September


© Heath Muchena, 2014

5 Comments on “September Spring III”

  1. owfotografik says:

    Very beautiful. Thank you for sharing


  2. Wendy Kate says:

    Lovely sounds with your words – I think I mean alliteration! 🙂


  3. Beautiful u made my soul sing .


  4. ElusivePub says:

    wonderful, it made me think about perspective. I would love if you could check out my writing and giving me some feedback if you could spare the time


  5. kikonizzy says:

    I am so glad I found your blog! I love using alliteration in my work sometimes too. this is a very enjoyable piece! Thank you, and I will be reading more of your work!


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