she let him go

thinking he’d waste her time

not knowing he was the only one of his kind

she’d ever come to know


and it worked for a while –

others wanted her

and she enjoyed their advances…


but only he

could make her heart smile

and only with him

was she ever truly in the comfort…


those were her own words –



© Heath Muchena, 2014

8 Comments on “heartfelt”

  1. Heartfelt… Very good


  2. milliethom says:

    I really like this one.


  3. jensenempire2551 says:

    Truthfully said, there are very few of use!


  4. Kelly Grace says:

    I’ve been reading around your blog and Dude, you gotta change your tagline because you outgrew it! I really love that you capture relationships and intimacy without an vulgarity. Just the emotion words that carry the deep feelings of the human heart. Beautiful.


  5. Maëva says:

    That last sentence. So beautiful


  6. I of July says:

    Thanks you all for your wonderful feedback… love always 🙂


  7. vivachange77 says:

    The heart knows. Lovely.


  8. Steph says:

    Your pen is a watershed of joy to experience.


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