Stalked

Man 1:

yo, I don’t understand why she just can’t let go

I mean – she grew up with both parents and all

so I don’t get where the abandonment issues be coming from

 

Man 2:

calm down dawg, tell me… what’s wrong?

 

Man 1:

mannnn, she wrong!

girl finishes work at four, right

and she knows damn well I’ll still be on the go

so she waits

outside the hall, at the bus stop

hell, sometimes she’s outside the house, right at my front door

 

Man 2:

noooo!

sounds like you’re being stalked

 

Man 1:

you don’t say man, I know! I’ve been saying so but you never hear me tho…

that’s why I don’t be tellin’ you my probs

 

Man 2:

you should just keep a log man, cos tomo… who knows

shiiiit…. next it’ll be popo at your door

you know how it go… I’m tellin’ you dawg… some of these girls be loco

real talk

 

Man 1:

tell me something I don’t know

mannnn… I feel like I done hit a brick wall with that one fo sho

 

 

© Heath Muchena, 2015


6 Comments on “Stalked”

  1. Steph says:

    omgosh, i love this conversation! πŸ™‚

    boy, you better be shu dat woman aint gunna leave you…as you got style…in writing, fo shu! πŸ™‚

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  2. I of July says:

    thanks Steph… you always put a smile on my face πŸ™‚

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  3. milliethom says:

    This is really great. I love the conversation between the two men – and the lingo is downright ‘cool’!

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  4. I of July says:

    I’m glad you like it πŸ™‚ thanks Millie

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  5. curtisbausse says:

    Love the dialogue here!

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  6. I of July says:

    that means a lot… thanks pal

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