Bachelor Blues

told her of my bachelor blues
and how lonesome this cuffing season will be –

she couldn’t stop laughing
hues in her cheeks like a Sparklemuffin

then she kindly reminded me with a gentle and soothing voice:
you win some, but others you lose, you see.


© Heath Muchena, 2015



4 Comments on “Bachelor Blues”

  1. skat says:

    I like the turnaround at the end and the internal rhymes. Very good.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. H.M. Nolan says:

    loved this one

    Liked by 1 person

  3. I of July says:

    I’m grateful 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. I of July says:

    thanks Skat… appreciate it 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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