Right to Rest

first, realise the only respectable reason for taking rest is so that you can relax and recuperate
but remember, these days the right to it is overrated
so as soon as your reflexes are right again
rise and let the rejuvenation reflect in how you react to life
as you run your race, and all the rest…

 

© Heath Muchena, 2015

 

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15 Comments on “Right to Rest”

  1. JunkChuck says:

    Interesting. I’m curious about your thought process on the structure–specifically, the line lengths. I don’t mean to ask you to explain, but rather that it gave me pause to go back, think, and wonder a little–generaly a good thing. Your use of sound is stellar, by the way.

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  2. Jeanne says:

    Loved all the r’s. Well said.

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  3. I of July says:

    thanks Chuck, to be honest I don’t even think I can explain it well enough even if I try… sometimes I feel the sentences write themselves. I’m glad you mention sound because generally that’s what I follow…. I really can’t stand reading back what I’ve written almost all of the time – nice for you to prompt me to, it’s usually when I read comments such as yours that I can even stomach it… you’re always helpful, I appreciate that, esp the fact that you don’t demand explanations since I’m terrible at giving them… enjoy your weekend buddie 🙂

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  4. I of July says:

    rrrrrr 🙂 thanks dear… I overdid it, didn’t mean to, so really glad you like it

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  5. Josh Wrenn says:

    Excellent! I don’t know if you meant it that way, but I see that as something a lot of people I know use an excuse to remain uninvolved in important matters.

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  6. On the dime again! 🙂

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  7. The story line is great and freeform seems to be more accepted these days. I enjoy your stories more than anything. You open and close as you should. Great write!

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  8. The condition of humanity doesn’t allow for extended rest. Even whilst traveling, I am in the mode of service to others.

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  9. vivachange77 says:

    Wonderful use of alliteration ! 🙂

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  10. I of July says:

    that’s true too Josh

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  11. I of July says:

    thanks Will 🙂

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  12. I of July says:

    Thanks Alan, so pleased with your comment. Happy to know you find the pieces complete in their form and that they tell the story…. I’ve often wondered, so it’s really good know 🙂

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  13. I of July says:

    I can see that in your work righteous one… really enjoy your On The Road adventures too 🙂

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  14. I of July says:

    thanks Chronicler 🙂

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  15. Hello, I do stop by often. I enjoy your work looking forward to reading more.

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