two-faced god

Woman: You’re never available, and yet you know I need you… on some perennial, all the time type…

Man: But you know the reasons… my work, the movement, and all the rest. At least I visit every other season

Woman: If only that were true, you come here in the fall, when your wife is away, otherwise you don’t come at all. You were last here in January, as if my home is Janus’ temple, open only in time of war

Man: Still you let me… and I take it not only because you love my strokes, but because you understand my life, my goals…. I know you see my vision… the diamonds, the gold

Woman: Just stop!

Man: I know I’ve failed you many times but please, give me one more chance… let me rekindle your desire!

Woman: No! Go! I’m done playing with fire. My temple is closed; you two-faced god!

 

© Heath Muchena, 2015

 

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21 Comments on “two-faced god”

  1. Mikki Donaldson says:

    Love it!

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  2. I of July says:

    thanks Mikki 🙂

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  3. Amazingly written

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  4. I of July says:

    Thank you caughtintheclouds

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  5. milliethom says:

    Great dialogue – and it definitely packs a punch. And, in my opinion, he definitely deserves to be turned away. Wonderful final sentence! 🙂

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  6. A playwright you may become! Awesome!

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  7. ahbengo says:

    What a pleasure reading this!

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  8. Short Scare says:

    Pretty sweet, t’was cool how you led up to the “two-faced god”. However to be honest, why the term god? I know it sounds pretty sweet all together, but how is he a god?

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  9. vivachange77 says:

    Really interesting conversation involving eternal cross-purposes. I like it !

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  10. MissFit says:

    i never thought of using the word perennial for humans. that is brilliant

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  11. inspiringmotivations says:

    Reblogged this on Through Knowledge Gain Power Ltd and commented:
    Choices

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  12. I of July says:

    thanks Millie, coming from the dialogue queen, it means a lot 🙂

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  13. I of July says:

    King Will 🙂

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  14. milliethom says:

    Hi Heath. I loved your two-faced god post! 🙂 As for me being the dialogue queen… I’m still working on things. I suppose we writers are never completely satisfied with our own work, are we? Thank you for the inspiring comment, though. 🙂

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  15. I of July says:

    thank you very much ahbengo 🙂

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  16. I of July says:

    maybe she didn’t want to say dog so she reversed it, or she was referencing Janus, or both, only she truly knows Short Scare 🙂

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  17. I of July says:

    interesting observation, chronicler. thanks 🙂

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  18. I of July says:

    awww, thanks MissFit 🙂

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  19. I of July says:

    satisfaction implies some sort of ending, I think… and we’re never done, so you’re right 🙂

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  20. milliethom says:

    I know, I always think I should do better. But I’m very self-critical in everything I do. Perhaps I should try to like myself more! haha. 🙂

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