the clear shade of scent

her scent triggered tumescence… and in that very moment the writer in him couldn’t help but make comparisons with Rétif de la Bretonne’s fetish for Madonna Parangon’s feet (in rose-coloured shoes with green heels and a pretty rosette); and thinking that by the same measure, he was not a pervert – only that her pheromones heightened his senses and her charm stiffened his tenderness


© Heath Muchena, 2015


12 Comments on “the clear shade of scent”

  1. redosue says:

    Delightfully visual and funny! Nothing like stiff tenderness to bring a smile to a woman’s face.


  2. I of July says:

    ha ha thanks Susanne, glad you enjoyed reading 🙂


  3. milliethom says:

    Great imagery, Heath … and definitely smile-evoking. 🙂

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  4. I of July says:

    I appreciate the feedback Millie, glad you smiled. Have an awesome weekend blessed Lady 🙂

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  5. milliethom says:

    You too. ❤

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  6. Mary says:

    I see the scene through your words Heath, great imagery writing – both funny and good reading! Have a wonderful weekend.

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  7. I of July says:

    thank you Mary, enjoy your weekend too wonderful soul 🙂

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  8. Mary says:

    Same to you Heath!


  9. impostorpawn says:

    hahaha i loved the bit about him not being a pervert….short and sweet

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  10. kukupassion says:

    great imagery, in so few words…. this is good Muchena

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  11. I of July says:

    I was waiting for someone to bring that up… ha haaaa, just made my day impostorpawn 🙂

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  12. I of July says:

    thank you dear Kuku… I appreciate you

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