Pleasure in Platonia (v)

they took a walk one fine evening
under the magnificence of the iridescent sky

happiness was painted on her cheeks
with passions she couldn’t disguise

giving flair to her blanching hair
experience hidden behind youthful eyes

enjoying the fruits of their legitimate desires

fully indulgent
but wise enough to know that love is an idea
and only exists in its expression

© Heath Muchena, 2015


11 Comments on “Pleasure in Platonia (v)”

  1. Laine Jensen says:


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  2. A nice blend of elements, class write

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  3. I of July says:

    thank you so much, Humble one 🙂

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  4. I of July says:

    I appreciate that Laine, thank you 🙂

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  5. magicpoet01 says:

    Beautiful read aloud. Only one word worried me ‘blanching’ great for the sound but…?

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  6. tunisiajolyn84 says:

    Great imagery. Love!

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  7. I of July says:

    Oh I figured it may spark the mystery but that’s supposing your concern is one of the woman’s age or rather their difference in age?


  8. I of July says:

    thank you lovely one 🙂


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