His Heart

if he gave you his whole
would you hold it as though it was also
just as fragile as yours?

if he said to you his belonged
would you take that for weakness?
and deep down would you rather he withhold?
would you still desire the old baddish bloke?

if he not only promised, but showed
and stayed faithful
would that be his best hope of redress?

if he was vulnerable
would you think him less of a man?
and if he cried
would you be kind in deed and mind?
 

© Heath Muchena, 2016

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10 Comments on “His Heart”

  1. Absoutely beautiful this piece!

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  2. I of July says:

    Thanks man, glad you can relate

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  3. Mary says:

    Wonderful piece Heath.

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  4. vivachange77 says:

    Tender and fragile. Beautiful. And shows the compelling strength of vulnerability.

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  5. I of July says:

    Thanks Mary, it’s good to actually get a woman’s feedback on it… much appreciated and glad you feel that way about the piece 🙂

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  6. I of July says:

    A deep and warm description and comment… one that only a beautiful soul can give 🙂 thanks

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  7. Mary says:

    You are an emotional writer and it is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a lovely weekend Heath!

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  8. I of July says:

    The emotions I try to capture with words you do with paint 🙂 thanks, enjoy your weekend too

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  9. Tikeetha T says:

    Dang. This is so powerful.

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  10. I of July says:

    Hi Tikeetha, glad you think it so… how kind of you. Thanks

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