His Heart
Posted: April 15, 2016 Filed under: Inhibitions Illustrated 10 Commentsif he gave you his whole
would you hold it as though it was also
just as fragile as yours?
if he said to you his belonged
would you take that for weakness?
and deep down would you rather he withhold?
would you still desire the old baddish bloke?
if he not only promised, but showed
and stayed faithful
would that be his best hope of redress?
if he was vulnerable
would you think him less of a man?
and if he cried
would you be kind in deed and mind?
© Heath Muchena, 2016
Absoutely beautiful this piece!
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Thanks man, glad you can relate
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Wonderful piece Heath.
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Tender and fragile. Beautiful. And shows the compelling strength of vulnerability.
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Thanks Mary, it’s good to actually get a woman’s feedback on it… much appreciated and glad you feel that way about the piece 🙂
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A deep and warm description and comment… one that only a beautiful soul can give 🙂 thanks
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You are an emotional writer and it is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a lovely weekend Heath!
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The emotions I try to capture with words you do with paint 🙂 thanks, enjoy your weekend too
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Dang. This is so powerful.
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Hi Tikeetha, glad you think it so… how kind of you. Thanks
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