Lady Lavinia’s Lover (v)

my vision was firmly fixed
and she was the dazzling point
that paralysed my optic nerve
leaving me in a state of hypnosis

my senses besieged
i was weakened
ready to serve
brought to my knees

and thus life seemed
to have an erotic endpoint
as its essential impetus

© Heath Muchena, 2016


7 Comments on “Lady Lavinia’s Lover (v)”

  1. I of July says:

    Hi Lauryn, thanks for the huge compliment… much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂 xo

    Liked by 1 person

  2. I’ve been enjoying your poems. Your titles are really good.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. I of July says:

    Hi Mark, thanks pal. Now that you’ve pointed it out, I’ll have to admit that I am fond of titles… they can give a piece context… glad you find them amusing 🙂


  4. Lauryn Jean says:

    No problem! I’ll be looking for more poetry! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  5. vivachange77 says:

    It’s an endpoint that never entirely goes away. At least not so far.


  6. I of July says:

    Cool 🙂 I’ll also stop by BiF and check it out

    Liked by 1 person

  7. I of July says:

    too true 🙂


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