The Trajectory of Victory
Posted: August 26, 2016 Filed under: Writings by one ambidextrous... 6 Commentsto the heavens I give thanks
for every profitable moment
like a Richard Quest announcement
for all the hardwork, bless!
the reward – a mind at peace
no stress
thus minimal need for rest
as for questions and requests
or clarity on sentence… one day it may all make sense
granted I keep good health
and reveal the rest of my creative wealth
and then it may even be up to you
to put me up there with the greats
for now… baby steps
on these grounds, on this earth
let’s sow a seed
so that one day an Eden perhaps
© Heath Muchena, 2016
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This is wonderful! The final stanza is so hopeful in these awful dark times.
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Hey sweet Sue, been a lil’ while. Hope you’re doing great and thanks for the kind comment. Glad you enjoyed it!
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I often read your work but don’t comment as I try to read as many of the blogs I enjoy as possible in one sitting. Your work is consistently diverting.
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I do it for you so I really appreciate that, thanks love!
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Good approach. Kind of depressing to realize that most artists don’t get appreciated until after they’re dead.
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On the other hand it’s hard to say who is to blame since usually the genius mind is only perceived as such long after its own lustre or spark since naturally we can only appreciate what we comprehend, and most times the great artists are just a bit ahead of time to expect people to appreciate the value of their work instantly. But ideally yes, it would be nice if they got their labour’s worth.
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