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Posted: October 17, 2016 Filed under: Words In Imaginary Motion 4 CommentsOften I quit writing
But that never lasts more than a minute
Since that’s how I make my living
And I’m always lost in moments serene
That sometimes I end up forgetting to keep in touch with keen
Which admittedly is an awful thing
But is not forever everything…
So why then am I always tryna hold on to feelings fleeting?
© Heath Muchena, 2016
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Your writing is usually so precise. I love it when the meter forces you into using a non-word. 🙂
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I wholeheartedly appreciate those remarks, especially considering that the madness of my creations which I’m aware at times lead to deviation from syntactic norms are still somehow comprehensible 🙂 Thanks again, you’re kind to me.
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Forever is a myth and the fleeting feelings are the way to be…so you are right on track! 😀
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🙂 haaaaa, I sure hope so, thanks for the comment
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