Bedside Review ii

let there be less pathos and more profundity in your poetry
and show more of that strength which to me you’ve always exhibited
instead of having a plethora of weaknesses fill the pages

but is not the revelation of man’s imperfection what turns a mere portrait into a work of art?

 

© Heath Muchena, 2016

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2 Comments on “Bedside Review ii”

  1. Susanne says:

    If so, then surely we are all (women, too) works of art?

    Liked by 1 person

  2. I of July says:

    Oh, of course. Women yes, absolutely. The greatest.

    Like


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